Prince’s Gambit by Onyx Path Publishing

Do you enjoy social deduction card games like Werewolf or The Resistance? You know, those fast-paced party icebreakers where you and your guests gather around a table and then accuse each other of being the bad guy? There’s generally a lot of shouting and laughing in this entertaining milieu of paranoia, seriousness and absurdity.

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It only seems natural that this genre of social card games would embrace the likes of the RPG World of Darkness setting Vampire: The Masquerade.

Onyx Path Publishing are promoting a new Kickstarter campaign to crowdfund the publication of Prince’s Gambit. Check it out. There’s a gameplay demo and lots of information to sink your teeth into.

The night is young as you step into the VIP room of the hottest nightclub in town. You’re one of the leaders of the city’s vampire clans, and you’ve been summoned to meet with the Prince, along with your Machiavellian peers.

As each Primogen enters, the candles flicker as you stare into their eyes. The politics of the undead are always deadly, but there’s a heightened danger tonight. Because you know that at least one of the vampires staring back at you is a traitor, a member of the nefarious Sabbat.

The Prince demands that you work together on a series of intrigues. It’s a risk, but you’re already part of the deadly game. You have to see the Prince’s gambit through to the bitter end.

Proofreading Tips

Are you in the habit of checking your work emails before you click send? If you don’t, you probably should. It could negatively affect your business.

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Simple typos like ‘teh’ can look unprofessional, especially when you are corresponding with a client or other third party. Ideally, you want to present yourself as a professional and should communicate as such. People are judgemental bastards. People suck.

Of course, there are situations when you can relax and bend the grammatical rules. Consider your relationship and rapport with the recipient. When in doubt, ask a colleague to review your message.

The following proofreading tips are appropriate for anything from EDMs and manuscripts to speeches and newsletters.

Read from the End to the Start

How do you read backwards? Ah, no. When you proofread a document you are most likely very familiar with it because you wrote it. By the time you scour the page for errors you are probably skipping over the words and missing obvious mistakes.

To alleviate this terrible affliction, we recommend that you ask our Copywriting Commander for treatment. The cure comes in the form of reading the last sentence and then backtracking one sentence at a time until you find yourself back at the beginning of the article.

Rather than go with the flow, this method forces you to take the time think about each sentence in isolation.

Perform an Oral Presentation

Get your head out of the gutters. At Word Tweak, we leave the dirty talk for our short fiction and poetry. While self editing a thing, read it out loud. If you trip over the words, consider the poor reader. Are there pacing issues? Too many long-winded sentence stuctures? Too many short bursts that look like a Morse code decryption?

Refine your message, yo.

Use Browser Extensions and Other Tools to Cheat

Some people just need a spell checker for assurance. Did I spell ‘onomatopoeia’ correctly? What about ‘Mussolini’ or ‘squirrel’? Hitting up Google can be time consuming and disruptive so why not install Grammarly or an alternative web app? If you care about AU spelling then Grammarly will probably aggravate you (if you’re a passionate Australian wordsmith like me).

Print It; Read It; Change It; Send It

Do you hate the environment? Fuck the trees, man. Print that shit. Print everything. your eyes are probably not liking the whole gotta-read-everything-on-the-computer-screen thing anyway. Wow, that escalated quickly.

Scribble on paper and mark up your changes.

Kill Redundant Phrases

The best communications are short and sweet. I often see ‘in order to’ when ‘to’ would suffice. yes, there are exceptions, especially when looking at creative writing (but we’ll discuss voice another time).

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